JSDC
Entry: Caliber
Official= Official Comment

From Jan
That's a great beginning smile . Suspense is rising ...
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From Curtis M Sawyer
Website: http://ussexcalibur.blogspot.com
...there is no future. There is no past. I live this moment as my last!
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From Curtis M Sawyer
Website: http://ussexcalibur.blogspot.com
Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other road... no other way. No day but today...
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From Q
Excellent piece. Felt like I was standing there, too.... with the stomach tumbling.
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From Sean Stubblefield
Website: http://www.geocities.com/exastra/home.htm
whew. i got chills. i've totally been there. in my life, and again, just then, in your words. "I'm a bold girl". "If you’re so bold, then why are you so scared?"
i love those lines. so potent, poignant, prominent.
of course, we press the buzzer. the story demands it.
there, the future awaits the daring (wo)man... and yet waits for no (wo)man.
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From Dave Grant
Website: http://www.greatestblogeverwritten.blogspot.com/
I'll take the liberty of advancing the story:

J.Sto vs. The Buzzer

Stover: If you're so bold, then why are you so scared?

The Buzzer: You're scared because you fear failu....

[SUPER STEALTH NINJA KICK!]

[BUZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!]

Stover: Undeniable future victory, fool. Face!


At least....that's how I like to think it went down...
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From Q
Did you consider a Doorbell Dixie?
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From Anonymous
Got Aidmheil? Better believe it!
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From EM
I'm wise to you, Stover. Through the simple process of elimination, I submit...

TSL - a Spike Lee joint.
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From Stef
I love Curtis quoting RENT!!
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